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Joong Hyuck Cha and Dong Seong Kim, "Design and Implementation of Real-Time Monitoring Tool for Data Distribution Service," (S)IEIE Transactions on Smart Processing and Computing, 2018(ISSN: 2287-5255)
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Date : 2018-07-06
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03-Jul-2018

Dear Prof. Kim:Manuscript ID SPC-2018-0030 entitled "Design and Implementation of Real-Time Monitoring Tool for Data Distribution Service" which you submitted to the IEIE Transactions on Smart Processing and Computing, has been reviewed. The comments of the reviewer(s) are included at the bottom of this letter.

The reviewer(s) have recommended publication, but also suggest some minor revisions to your manuscript. Therefore, I invite you to respond to the reviewer(s)' comments and revise your manuscript.

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Associate Editor Comments to Author:

Associate Editor
Comments to the Author:
Dear Authors,

Your paper entitled Design and Implementation of Real-Time Monitoring Tool for Data Distribution Service has been reviewed and found to be suitable for publication in IEIE Transaction on Smart Signal and Computing (SPC), subject to minor revisions suggested by the reviewers. The reviewers comments are included below.

I have also reviewed these comments and I agree that a minor revision would be required to publish your paper. Id like to ask you to submit a revised manuscript and point-to-point response note.

Again, I really appreciate your submission for the IEIE SPC.



Reviewer(s)' Comments to Author:

Reviewer: 1

Comments to the Author
Paper presents a novel approach to detect the middleware error for DDS in an NCS. The problem statement is clearly defined along with a detailed description of shortcomings of the existing scheme. Authors have thoroughly explained their proposal and justified the superiority of their proposal with the help of numerical analysis.
There is still room to improve the presentation of the paper as there are very obvious typos, missing references such as
1) There are two subsections mentioned as "2.3".
2) Proper reference for "SW Log Debugging" is not mentioned.
3) In the section "Smart DDS Monitoring Tool Requirements of NCS", Authors mentioned "specification 1.2 and 2.1" and didn't explain what they are, also corresponding references.

Reviewer: 2

Comments to the Author
The manuscript proposed a monitoring tool that can reduce the error detection time and provide information for error recovery phase.

These issues should be considered in the revised version:
- The advantages of the new design that lead to the time reduction of the error detection should be more clearly expressed in Section 3.1.
- Are there any differences between the data provided by this new tool and those obtained by others?
- There exists two Section 2.3 in the manuscript.
- Figures 5, 7, 8, and 9 should be provided with higher resolutions.