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Seung-Han Kim, Da-Hye Kim, Dong-Seong Kim, "Event Log Analysis Software Design for Naval Combat System using Smart Platform", IEIE SPC
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Date : 2018-08-02
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Reviewer(s)' Comments to Author:

Reviewer: 1

Comments to the Author
1. There are many typos and grammar errors in this manuscript. The authors should carefully revise the whole paper to avoid such obvious mistakes.
2. Figures 1 and 2 have not been clearly described. E.g., there is no information explaining what are the arrows and why do we see the the directions of arrows.
3. Section 3.1 should be revised completely since the organization is not clear.
4. The existing software used for evaluation comparisons is not clearly specified.
5. It might be better in terms of readability to name the proposed method and even the existed one.


Reviewer: 2

Comments to the Author
The paper proposed a log-analysis and parameter-modifying software for NCSs. The overall explanation of the proposal is clear, it can be further improved especially the quality of the figures should be improved for the better understanding.