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Fabliha Bushra Islam, Cosmas Ifeanyi Nwakanma, Jae-Min Lee, and Dong-Seong Kim, "IoT-Based HVAC Monitoring System for Smart Factory" 2020 ICTC, Oct. 21 - 23, Jeju, Korea (Accept)
By : Bushra
Date : 2020-09-14
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======= Review 1 =======

> *** Relevance: How well does the content fit the conference scope? Is this paper handling an important theme in this area?
Good (4)

> *** Completeness: Does this paper describe the problem clearly? Are the results of this paper reproducible via experiments (implementations, proofs)? How well is the result analysis done with the previous works? How clear is the paper's conclusion for the problem tackled?
Good (4)

> *** Originality: Does this paper include any novel approaches or new applications that have never been tried?
Good (4)

> *** Presentation: Are the title, abstract, and keywords appropriate? How proper is the organization and description method of this paper?
Good (4)

> *** Comments to authors: Please provide detailed comments to the authors.

The authors presented monitoring system for smart factory. The paper is well organized and written. The topic of the paper is relevant to scope of conference. For the camera-ready paper, it is required to enhance the quality of the figures in the paper. Some information in the figures is not easily recognized.

> *** Recommendation: Please provide your overall recommendation on the acceptance of the paper. (Final acceptance decisions will also consider literal responses to the questions below.)
Weak Accept (3)

======= Review 2 =======

> *** Relevance: How well does the content fit the conference scope? Is this paper handling an important theme in this area?
Good (4)

> *** Completeness: Does this paper describe the problem clearly? Are the results of this paper reproducible via experiments (implementations, proofs)? How well is the result analysis done with the previous works? How clear is the paper's conclusion for the problem tackled?
Good (4)

> *** Originality: Does this paper include any novel approaches or new applications that have never been tried?
Good (4)

> *** Presentation: Are the title, abstract, and keywords appropriate? How proper is the organization and description method of this paper?
Good (4)

> *** Comments to authors: Please provide detailed comments to the authors.



> *** Recommendation: Please provide your overall recommendation on the acceptance of the paper. (Final acceptance decisions will also consider literal responses to the questions below.)
Accept (4)

======= Review 3 =======

> *** Relevance: How well does the content fit the conference scope? Is this paper handling an important theme in this area?
Good (4)

> *** Completeness: Does this paper describe the problem clearly? Are the results of this paper reproducible via experiments (implementations, proofs)? How well is the result analysis done with the previous works? How clear is the paper's conclusion for the problem tackled?
Good (4)

> *** Originality: Does this paper include any novel approaches or new applications that have never been tried?
Good (4)

> *** Presentation: Are the title, abstract, and keywords appropriate? How proper is the organization and description method of this paper?
Good (4)

> *** Comments to authors: Please provide detailed comments to the authors.

In this paper, the authors present an Internet of Things (IoT) based heating, ventilation and air conditioning (HVAC) monitoring platform for smart factory. In the simulations, they show the classification of the type of material used for the smart factory wall. In this reviewer's opinion, the paper satisfies the requirements of the originality and novelty, and it can be accepted.

> *** Recommendation: Please provide your overall recommendation on the acceptance of the paper. (Final acceptance decisions will also consider literal responses to the questions below.)
Weak Accept (3)