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Reviewer 1:
1) References need to be updated. Most of them are pre-2010 papers, and the latest one is in 2018, but it does not seem to have much to do with the core suggestions in this paper. It is necessary to present the latest papers with academic value related to the content proposed in this paper.
2) It is difficult to find a way to propose. It is judged that this paper is about how to connect and set up devices. It is a natural methodology to have a redundancy structure in a network configuration using a switch, and there can be many structures and a number of configuration cases for this. I think that it is not possible to give a meaning as a thesis for one of these cases. If you want to get the value of the thesis, it is not a structure and a setting, but a problem that can occur in this structure, and this problem has been studied in existing studies (presenting the latest article), and there is a methodology differentiated from them in this article. Should be presented.
Reviewer 2:
1) Since the redundancy itself, which is easily predicted to improve performance due to redundancy, is the main focus of the paper, the specific suggestions or contributions of this paper are not clear.
2) It is necessary to clearly describe whether only SW or HW was used for performance evaluation, and used HW, SW, and traffic.
3) Since most of the references are previous papers such as 2010 and 2012, it is necessary to add references that reflect recent research trends.