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Efficient-Spectrum Management Based on Localization of Primary User Position Toward 5G (major revision)
By : Gaspard
Date : 2020-06-30
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Dear Mr Gaspard Gashema,

COM-2020-0284

Efficient-Spectrum Management Based on Localization of Primary User Position Toward 5G

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Associate Editor Comments:

Comments to the author

The reviewers have identified some interesting points in this work but have suggested several improvements and clarifications, which can be found in the attached list of comments.



Reviewer Comments:

Comments to the Author

#1 Submitted by: Reviewer 1
The authors consider timely topic in this paper. However, there are some issues related to the results and theoretical derivations provided in the paper. The comments are listed below:
1. More significant contributions are required. Please check three points of key contributions. Except first one others are not much significant.
2. The authors indicated semiveriogram after equation 11. This term should be explained in the text.
3. Further clarifications on Fig. 4 are required. Present clarifications are not sufficient to my belief.
4. Is the equation 17 complete? Complete equation with proper clarifications on all terms are required.
5. In 3.3.2, the authors indicated Markov localization and particle filtering. Please explain and define them with proper referencing.
6. Simulation parameters need to be tabulated.
7. Where did the authors indicate average capacity in the system model and theoretical analysis portion? However, the results in FIg. 9 is showing plots of the average capacity.
8. How did the authors get expression of throughput with KF and other techniques? I could not locate them.
9. In conclusion, RSSI is wrongly written as resource signal strength indicator.

#2 Submitted by: Reviewer 2
Overall, this is a very interesting paper and a useful contribution to the literature. I have two suggestions that would make this paper more accessible and useful. First, this paper reads somewhat clumsily, as the text is missing many articles (i.e. "the", "a", and "an"). This is a not uncommon situation for those whose first language is not English. Additionally, in some places, the grammatical structure is somewhat awkward. To make this clearer, I have attached a PDF file which contains an example of what I mean. This situation can be readily overcome by having a native English speaker review the paper for grammar and structure.

The second suggestion is to provide some additional technical clarification in section 4 Performance Evaluation. It would be useful to better characterize the two-dimensional area wherein the performance of the two approaches are being evaluated. There is a general statement that an environment is assumed that has "...many phenomena affecting the propagation of signal such as shadowing, fading and noise effects." While this clearly indicates that there are a mix of statistical and deterministic sources of channel degradation, it would be very useful to discuss how this part of the channel is characterized. For instance, if this channel interference is primarily deterministic, are more or less sensors required than if the channel interference is primarily statistical. If a 50-50 mixture (however one defines that) of deterministic and statistical interference is present, does that evaluation result in an "optimum" number of sensors for maximizing usage of the spectrum. Detailed consideration of these aspects of the problem may be beyond the scope of the submitted paper, but should be at least addressed, and possibly discussed as an area for further investigation in the conclusion section, much like the discussion of the hybrid CRN scheme.

Again, a very interesting paper.